For this second draft before my final, I paid close attention to my notes from Frame.io. I sped up the falling and placement of each piece, as was recommended. I also added SFX for each time a piece falls into place. I also cut the ending shorter and made the eye movements more noticeable. However, I did not change the background color, as I believe my animation stands out better on black. I also kept the five keywords of my company in mind while fixing my animation and found that this draft hits all five points perfectly. There are still some more touchups I’m looking to make before finalizing this animation. I want to look at more background options and see if there is something else that may look better than black. I am thinking I could also have something going on in the background of my animation so the logo feels better placed. I also want to add a company name so the logo isn’t just being loosely used in this animation. Finally, I want to look into maybe adding some type of music or children playing in the background between SFX so the logo feels better placed.
